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Date: 2008-05-08 11:44
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Hunting for the Perfect Detail

 


                              


Hello!  I’d first like to thank Jen for inviting me to be a guest blogger today.  I’m thrilled to be here
J

 

I’m blogging today about the research I needed to do in order to make my Study series realistic.  Many of my readers have asked me if fiction writers research or do we make it all up.  Well…we make it all up.  Okay – that’s the end of my blog, please leave a comment on your way out…. Sorry – I couldn’t resist. J 

 

The real answer is YES, fiction writers do a lot of research.  In order to maintain that “suspension of disbelief” for our readers, we need to have certain details correct or else risk jolting the reader out of our stories.

 

Even in fantasy, where the setting and inhabitants and magic are all created, an author can’t make things up willy-nilly.  In the first book of my fantasy series, Poison Study my main character learns how to pick a lock.  The world of Ixia is a complete fabrication, but in this world there are metal locks with keys that work just like on Earth.  Now, I can write she used her magic to open the lock, which is perfectly fine if I set up that she has that particular magical skill, but if I’m going to say she “picked” the lock, well – I better know how you pick a lock.  And not cheat and use that Hollywood booby pin nonsense – any good locksmith would scoff at that!

 

So I learned the proper way to pick a pin and tumbler lock (ones with keys), using tension wrenches and diamond picks.  And just for the record, I am NOT responsible for that rash of strange break-ins in our neighborhood last year ;>  Really – not me – and besides, nothing was stolen – so it’s not really a break-in……  er…..yeah….back to my topic.

 

Which is research.  Another subject I needed to research was how to taste foods.  My main protagonist, Yelena learns how to taste food for poisons – the tasting methods in the book are real methods used by professionals who work in the food industry.  I just happened to be married to one professional who is an expert in tasting chocolate (I know – I know – I hear it all the time! He has a dream job.). 

 

And for those who are interested in becoming a food taster – here’s a quick 5-step method:

 

How to Become a Food Taster in 5 Easy Steps

by Maria V. Snyder

 

  1. Amass a file folder full of technical articles on tasting.  Having a husband who is an expert in “tasting” and has a degree in engineering helps.  Just show appropriate interest to husband and wait.

 

  1. Read and digest technical articles.  Titles range from the intriguing, “Learning and Speaking the Language of Flavor,” to the scientific, “The Flavor-Fusion Illusion; The Psychology of Flavor,” to the fun, waist-expanding, “How to be a Knowledgeable and Discriminating Ice Cream Gourmet.”  At the end of this step, you will know more about the tongue than you really wanted (trust me!).

 

  1. Learn about the appropriate tasting methods.  Tasting is not just about the flavor, it’s a complex mixture of sensory data.  The smell, how food feels in the mouth or “mouthfeel,” and even how it looks are all important.  Or you can use the 10-year-old boy quick, “If it smells good, it’ll taste good,” test for unknown edibles.

 

  1. Practice methods learned in step three using chocolate (Why use anything else?).   Examine the chocolate.  Is it smooth?  Does it give a nice clean snap when broken in half?  Free of that white stuff (i.e. bloom)?  Smell it.  Put a piece in your mouth.  Let it melt and coat your tongue.  Swallow a little bit to cover the back of your tongue.  How does it feel in your mouth?  How does it taste?  Gritty?  Bitter?  Fruity?  Sweet?  After you swallow it note the aftertaste.  Make notes (or not, depends on your ability to remember).  Drink some room temperature water to cleanse the palate.  Repeat analysis with different chocolates as many times as needed (if questioned, tell others with a haughty air, that you’re eating chocolate for science).  After sampling, compare and determine the best one.  How?  The best one will be the chocolate you liked the most.  

 

  1. Use these methods on all kinds of food and impress friends and relatives.  And if you encounter any “off” flavors, “strange” smells, or “unusual” tastes in your meal, review your recent history.  Fired anyone?  Cut someone off on the highway?  Forgot to send your mother flowers on Mother’s Day?  If the answer is “yes” to any or all questions, throw food away and don’t feed it to your dog (unless you’re looking to get a new dog).

 

Other research I needed to do for my Study series includes learning how to ride a horse for Magic Study. Having grown up in Philadelphia, I had zero knowledge about horses.  My friend, Susan offered to teach this city girl how to ride her horse, Kiki.

 

Kiki, an American Saddlebred, is 16.1 hands tall.  While I can’t tell you exactly how high that is, sitting on her for the very first time, I felt I was about ten feet from the hard, hard ground below.  I was wearing a helmet, but it seemed inadequate for protection – full body armor would have been more preferable to me. And it didn’t help my nerves when Kiki’s head went straight up, her left ear cocked back, and she gave me the eye without turning around.  With almost 360 degree vision, she only needed to move her head a little to keep me in sight.  And I knew she was plotting how to dump this stranger on her back into the nearest mud puddle.

 

Kiki though was a perfect horse for a terrified beginner.  At 22 years of age, she had seen it all, and we spent many hours slowly walking around the training ring.  It was July, she was hot and I probably could have gotten off and pushed her faster.

 

It was a scary, fun and interesting time.  I learned about horses and I learned about myself.  Mainly, that I like to be in complete control.  Even though I held the reins, I knew Kiki was in charge.

 

Learning how to blow glass for Fire Study was a blast.  In order to write the scenes with Opal, a glass artist in the book, I needed to learn how to work with molten glass.

 

The teacher made it look easy to gather a slug of glass.  But when it was my turn – yikes!  It was HOT!  The big vat of molten glass was kept in a rip roaring furnace at a toasty 2100 degrees Fahrenheit.  I held a metal rod, and, while squinting through an eye-melting orange light, I dipped the end into the thick goo and spun it, gathering a glob of glass onto the end.  The incandescent glob glowed as if alive. 

 

Once acquired, the slug then needed to be quickly shaped.  Glass cooled at a rapid pace, and, even though heat waves pulsed from the slug, it didn’t stay pliable for long.

 

My first paperweight was a misshapened blob.  After hours of practice, my ability improved, and I created a paperweight worthy to hold down my next novel’s manuscript pages.

I learned that working with glass required deft coordination, arm strength, tons of patience, and a good partner—it’s a good thing I have a day job! 

 

Not all my research is hands on – while it is my favorite way to learn and, really, who could resist taking money spent on glass classes off their taxes??  I also use the more traditional methods – like books and the Internet.  Although my non-fiction research books tend to be those written for children.  Yes, you read that right – kids’ books.  Why??  Because those books have big color pictures – like when I researched castles – that make it easier for me to describe.  Plus they give you the bare bones of information, and save me from wading through pages and pages of text.  So far, the kids’ books have been able to answer all my questions.

 

To make a long story even longer (hey I’m a novel writer – it’s hard for me to write under 100,000 words), I’ve given you a behind the scenes (so to speak) look at my methods of doing research for my books. 

 

Now it’s your turn.  What have you done in order to find information or learn a new skill??

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Sally Cinnamon: bucky writes
User: [info]elizawrites
Date: 2008-05-09 13:01 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)
Keyword:bucky writes

I've always wanted to try glass blowing. Now I definitely need to put it on my list.

I am going to a shooting range tomorrow to learn how to use a gun -- definitely for research! Maybe I should treat it like tasting something and take notes all the way through.

Love your books, by the way.

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smokingpigeon
User: [info]smokingpigeon
Date: 2008-05-09 13:08 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

I'm totally jealous about the glass blowing! I've watched it done at renaissance faires. The heat is simply unbelievable, like a wall of fire, and that's for people standing twelve feet away--not up close at the end of a rather short blowpipe.

Also envy you riding Kiki. I've never ridden a saddlebred, or any of the "walking" horses. Their trot is supposed to be silky-smooth, as opposed to up-and-down like a merry-go-round horse like other horses' trots. I've heard they're tempermental, though--is that true? Anyone know?

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User: (Anonymous)
Date: 2008-05-09 16:40 (UTC)
Subject: Kiki

As for riding, Kiki's trot didn't feel silky smooth to me as I bounced around. I was learning how to ride on an English saddle and couldn't post at all!

But according to her owner, Susan she was the Cadillac of horses :) She is also a sweetheart. Since she is the only horse I have ever ridden or gotten to know - I can't say if the breed is temperamental....I go ask my friend Susan :)

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smokingpigeon
User: [info]smokingpigeon
Date: 2008-05-09 21:00 (UTC)
Subject: Re: Kiki

I suppose western-trained horses might feel smoother--but dang, I've ridden some lumpy nags.

The whole posting thing is really hard on your inner thighs and leg muscles until you figure out how to let the horse toss you into the air, and then it's easy. But the real secret is...abs!

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User: (Anonymous)
Date: 2008-05-09 16:35 (UTC)
Subject: Thanks!

First I want to thank Jennifer for hosting me today :) Thanks!

Eliza - I'm glad you liked the books :) And glass blowing was fun - I enjoyed the classes even though I was a little scared of the heat at first. I also did a sampler class that had 2 weeks of glass fusing, 2 of stained glass, 2 of hot glass/blowing, and the last 2 of making glass beads. It was fantastic, not only do I have a ton of cool items to decorate with, but the class gave me enough info for writing and to see which art form is your favorite. I liked the glass fusing the best :)

I've only shot a 22 rifle - but going to a shooting ranges sounds like fun. And you have to take notes - listen to your instructor - they'll say quotable things. For example - when learning how to cut glass - for the little pieces - my instructor said, "scour it, flip it and hit it" on how to break a small piece - priceless info that's going right into the book!

Maria V.

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Eden Robins
User: [info]finitemonkey
Date: 2008-05-09 14:36 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

I love the idea of using kid's books! Having waded through hundreds of pages of text, that sounds delightful!

My favorite research experience thus far has been a trip to Philly's FOX News station to observe first-hand the messed-up ways that they create and broadcast the "news." Very enlightening.

-Eden

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smokingpigeon
User: [info]smokingpigeon
Date: 2008-05-09 14:38 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Come on, you can't leave it at that. SPILL!

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Eden Robins
User: [info]finitemonkey
Date: 2008-05-09 14:42 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Oh geez. Well that would be a long story. Suffice it to say, I had to do research "under cover," posing as a harmless out-of-town guest... and let's just say they recently fired ALL of their writers because they are "outmoded in a modern news room."

That and they get all their local news from police radio and local callers who have witnessed something perverse, maudlin, or otherwise grotesque. The big story when I was there was about a guy who kept farm animals in his basement. That, my friends, is "hard-hitting."

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smokingpigeon
User: [info]smokingpigeon
Date: 2008-05-09 14:51 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Sad. My newspapering relatives are revolving in their graves.

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User: (Anonymous)
Date: 2008-05-09 16:45 (UTC)
Subject: The horror!

Firing writers...tsk...tsk....what is this world coming to?

I'm glad you liked the idea of kid's books - they're perfect for me for now. Fantasy is a little easier for the writer - I created the government, the weather, the magical system - no need for too much research :)

Maria V.

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User: [info]granny1dan
Date: 2008-05-12 02:32 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

I guess this is research, but not really a skill. I have a mystery-writer friend who was writing a scene in which her character was locked in a car trunk and driven off somewhere. At the time my friend had a mini-van, no good for this type of research, so she came over to my house and I locked her in the trunk of my Toyota Corolla (in the driveway, with the neighbors watching). Dang these modern cars; she could easily find the glow-in-the-dark trunk release handle, which necessitated some fancy writing (blindfolded, tied up and going 60-miles an hour, etc.) to not make it too easy for the heroine. Of course, I insisted she lock me in the trunk, too, as I'd never been in one. Oh, and did I mention we're both over 50 years old? Thank god for good flexibility!

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smokingpigeon
User: [info]smokingpigeon
Date: 2008-05-12 02:40 (UTC)
Subject: (no subject)

Hey, you told me this story before, didn't you? (Now remembering who granny1dan is)

One time I locked Beth Gwinn in my rental car trunk when she dropped her camera and wanted to make sure it still worked, but without exposing the film. (This was back when she used film cameras.)

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